I am poem
I am a predator ready to hunt.
I wonder where they are grazing.
I hear there horns clashing together.
I see the prey fighting.
I am a white tiger hungry and fierce.
I pretend I'm harmless and cute.
I feel the rocks.
I touch the rocks under the water
I worry about my prey.
I cry when other animals cry.
I am a white tiger In the river.
I understand I am wild but may not stay wild forever.
I say I can make It to the top.
I dream that this will happen again someday.
I try to make It to the top of the mountain.
I hope I can sleep somewhere.
I am a white tiger climbing a mountain.
Hi im Lara Urlich im a student at kaingaroa school and i really like your poem i dont have much feedback just next time you could add a reflection and you seem like a really cool person.
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